http://invokes.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] invokes.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] paradisalost 2010-03-06 05:21 am (UTC)

gil sounds like a mary sue here...

Because there had never been many people who treated Gil like a friend (even his own adoptive brothers were the least of family to him growing up), someone like Kyle who was so direct and laid back was too alien to him. Could someone be so easy going like that?

"It's annoying."

He looked at Kyle, his golden eyes meeting with green ones. He stuffed his hands back into his coat and started towards the edge of the forest. "I don't get you or Donna."

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